1．網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物已很普遍；
2．網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的好處；
3．網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的缺點(diǎn)。


第一段宜開門見山，寫因特網(wǎng)的發(fā)展和計(jì)算機(jī)的普及使網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物日漸普遍；第二段談網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的便利，如節(jié)約時(shí)間和精力，尤其對(duì)老人、病人和忙碌的人更是如此；第三段談網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的缺點(diǎn)，其一是有時(shí)網(wǎng)上所見與實(shí)際所得不一致；其二是網(wǎng)上欺詐造成投訴困難。


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With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.

隨著因特網(wǎng)的發(fā)展和計(jì)算機(jī)的普及使網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物在我們的生活中日漸普遍。在這里消費(fèi)者幾乎可以買他們需要的所有東西。
Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.

網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物有很多優(yōu)點(diǎn)，其中最重要的也許就是方便。人們不必浪費(fèi)太多的精力和寶貴的時(shí)間去從一個(gè)商店到另一個(gè)來選擇他們喜歡的商品。對(duì)于老人病人和忙碌的人來說是特別可取，因?yàn)樗麄儾荒苡H自去商店�；ヂ�(lián)網(wǎng)上的商品有各種形狀，大小和顏色。他們所需要做的就是坐在電腦前，點(diǎn)擊鼠標(biāo)。他們訂購(gòu)的商品將會(huì)及時(shí)的送給他們。

However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.

然而，網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物也有它的缺點(diǎn)。第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)是消費(fèi)者不能看到商品或親自試一試。有時(shí)候，真正的商品可能會(huì)和他們?cè)陔娔X上看到的不一樣。第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn)是有些互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上的商店是沒有注冊(cè)的。從你身上得到錢后他們不會(huì)給你送任何東西。一旦被騙了，你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)你無處可抱怨。